It’s here: my notion of flash fiction. Which turns out to be pretty different to everyone else’s notion. What a surprise…
Some of you might recognise it. Go here if you’d rather listen than read. There again, the NS piece is a very slightly rewritten version so maybe doing both is the best way to go. Enjoy.
It all makes sense now… (Sorry — I'm slow.) The reading is lovely and evocative.
I enjoyed yours the most. Yes, I'm biased.
Here's why I liked your piece: you built and destroyed an entire world in the fewest words.
Yes, what a surprise. :) And I liked yours best too.
Both is absolutely the best way to go.
Good stuff.